The charts below show the proportions of the world's oil resources held in differentareas, together with the proportions consumed annually in the same areas. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features,makecomparisons where relevant.

The charts below show the proportions of the world's oil resources held in differentareas, together with the proportions consumed annually in the same areas.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features,makecomparisons where relevant.
The chart
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one illustrates data on what percentage of
oil
each area of the world
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,
whereas
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the share
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of
oil
consumed every year in the same areas.
Overall
, what stands out from the graphs is that
while
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East have the largest amount of
oil
resource
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resources
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in the world, the
percantage
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percentage
of
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oil
consumption
anually
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annually
in Asia is the highest. Looking into detail,
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East have the highest amount of
oil
and it
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ranks
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approximately 57%.
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area which
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considerable
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amount of
oil
is Canada with just under 15% and
oil
resources in other parts of the world
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lower and they all together account for about one-third. Regarding the other chart,it is apparent that
oil
usage in Asia, the United States and Western Europe is the largest(26.21%,25.48% and a little less than one-fifth respectively). The percentage of
oil
that is
used yearly in
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East, Central and South America and Eastern Europe is approximately the same ( 6%).Meanwhile,other areas do not use so much
oil
and each of them
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less than 5%.
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