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The charts below show the proportions of the world's oil resources held in differentareas, together with the proportions consumed annually in the same areas. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features,make comparisons where relevant.

The charts below show the proportions of the world's oil resources held in differentareas, together with the proportions consumed annually in the same areas. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features,make comparisons where relevant.
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Chart one illustrates data on what percentage of
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 each area of the world has,
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 the second one gives information about the share of
oil
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 consumed every year in the same areas.
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, what stands out from the graphs is that
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 the Middle East have the largest amount of
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 resources in the world, the percentage of
oil
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 consumption annually in Asia is the highest. Looking into detail,the Middle East have the highest amount of
oil
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 and it ranks at approximately 57%.Another area which has a considerable amount of
oil
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 is Canada with just under 15% and
oil
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 resources in other parts of the world are lower and they all together account for about one-third. Regarding the other chart,it is apparent that
oil
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 usage in Asia, the United States and Western Europe is the largest(26.21%,25.48% and a little less than one-fifth respectively). The percentage of
oil
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that is
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 used yearly in the Middle East, Central and South America and Eastern Europe is approximately the same ( 6%).Meanwhile,other areas do not use so much
oil
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 and each of them uses less than 5%.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words oil with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "approximately" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
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