There is a lot of pressure on young people today to succeed academically. As a result, some people believe that non-academic subjects, such as physical education and cookery, should be removed from the school syllabus so that children can concentrate on academic work. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge and experience
Young individuals are persuaded to perform better in academic
works
in Fix the agreement mistake
work
todays
context, part of the society commonly Change to a genitive case
today's
believed
that academically Wrong verb form
believe
non related
areas Add a hyphen
non-related
such
as physical education
and cookery
, should be removed from the school
curriculum to accommodate and prioritised
academic work.In my opinion, Wrong verb form
prioritise
this
leads to unhealthy
young generation with Correct article usage
an unhealthy
lack
of practical Correct article usage
a lack
skills
to strive in the
society.Correct article usage
apply
Thus
, this
writer wholeheartedly disagrees with the captioned statement.
First and fore most
, Correct your spelling
foremost
lack
of Correct article usage
a lack
skills
and knowledge in physical education
prones
the individual with less interest in exercises and less physical activity. Lack of Correct your spelling
prone
exercises
leads the individual into obesity and more prone to Fix the agreement mistake
exercise
non communicable
diseases, who ends up as an unhealthy individual.Add a hyphen
non-communicable
For instance
, according to
a
research done by the Correct article usage
apply
university
of Peradeniya 8 Capitalize word
University
yrs
ago, more than 20 % of Correct your spelling
years
school
children under age 12 had type 2 Diabetes mellitus, and they pointed out the fact, that children who had the disease did not participate in any sport
activities in the Change the noun form
sports
school
, and this
key research lead
the Sri Lankan authorities to make physical Change the verb form
leads
education
as a compulsory subject to ordinary level students in Sri Lanka. Hence
physical education
at young
age is very important.
Add an article
a young
Furthermore
, subjects
like cookery
can cultivates
life Change the verb form
cultivate
skills
and carrier
Correct your spelling
career
opertunities
for Correct your spelling
opportunities
the
youngsters. In the modern contemporary era, Correct article usage
apply
education
should focus the
independence of the student, Change preposition
on the
while
vocational subjects
help in doing so. Otherthan
that, it can Correct your spelling
Other than
creates
future pathways for job Change the verb form
create
oppertunities
in Correct your spelling
opportunities
cookery
industry, for whom Correct article usage
the cookery
not
Add a missing verb
are not
intrested
in academic Correct your spelling
interested
carriers
. Correct your spelling
careers
For instance
, the famouse
chef Pabilis Silva once told in a TV interview that he understood his passion Correct your spelling
famous
in
cooking from his Change preposition
for
school
cookery
teacher. Thus
, vocational subjects
have a huge impact in
Change preposition
on
once
life.
In conclusion, Correct your spelling
one
theoritical
and academic learning is important for Correct your spelling
theoretical
young
generation , but Add an article
the young
subjects
like physical education
and cookery
help to have better health in adult life ,
Remove the comma
apply
while
having good social and carrier
Correct your spelling
career
skills
to strive better in the
society. Correct article usage
apply
Hence
, this
writer is in
a strong notion that Verb problem
has
non academic
Add a hyphen
non-academic
subjects
should teach
at the Wrong verb form
be taught
school
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