You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The diagrams below show the water supply system in Australia present and in future. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words. Writing Task 1

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The provided diagram describes the supplying process of

water

, which is used and will be used in the future, in Australia.

Overall

, we can see that the diagram

take

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takes

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into consideration three different types of

water

, which are pure

water

storm

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stormwater

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water

and

watse

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water

Furthemore

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Furthermore

, it divides the path

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into

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four main categories, which include Dam/Storage, Household factories shops and city,

water

treatment

plant

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plants

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and

river

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rivers

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. More detailed, it can be noticed that the supplying process

start

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starts

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from Dam/storage, from where

watse

Correct your spelling

the

water

is transported to the

water

treatment

plan

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plant

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while

pure

water

is supplied to people in Household, shops and so on. After having

being

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been

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utilized

from

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people,

watse

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waste

water

is carried to the

water

treatment

plan

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plant

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while

storm

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stormwater

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water

reach

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reaches

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the river. Keeping in mind the previous considerations, the diagram indicates that

watse

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waste

water

is always transported to the

water

treatment

plan

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plant

show examples

storm

Correct your spelling

stormwater

show examples

water

to the river and pure

water

to the population.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".

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Vocabulary: Replace the words water, watse, treatment with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.

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Vocabulary: The word "diagram" was used 3 times.

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2Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
3Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
19Grammar mistakes
 

4 paragraphs

156 words

6.50

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 8.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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