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The chart belows gives information about how families in one country spent their weekly income in 1968 and in 2018

The chart belows gives information about how families in one country spent their weekly income in 1968 and in 2018
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THE PROVIDED BAR GRAPH ILLUSTRATES ,HOW
INDIVIDUALS
 SPENT THEIR WEEKLY
INCOME
 ON EIGHT VARIOUS
CONSUME
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 PRODUCTS IN ONE NATION IN 1968 AFTER 50 YEARS. LOOKING FROM AN
OVERALL
 PERSPECTIVE IT IS READIELY
APPERENT
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APPARENT
 THAT,FOOD MADE THE BIGGEST
EXPENDITURE
WHILE
FUEL
 AND POWER MADE THE LOWEST
EXPENDITURE
IN
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 THE
BEGINING
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BEGINNING
 OF THE TIME .
MOREOVER
,LEISURE ACTIVITIES
WAS
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WERE
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 THE HIGHEST PART
IN
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OF
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 THE
INCOME
WHILE
 PERSONAL
GOODS
 AND
FUEL
 AND POWER
THE
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 LEAST SHARE IN THE
INCOME
IN
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 THE END OF THE PERIOD. GETTING BACK TO DETAILS,
INDIVIDUALS
 SPENT HIGHEST CONTRIBUTION OF THEIR
INCOME
 TO BUY FOOD IN 1968.
THAT IS
 35%IN
PERSENTAGE
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PER CENT
 WISE.
INDIVIDUALS
 SPENT JUST UNDER 5% TO BUY
FUEL
 AND POWER IN THAT TIME PERIOD. AND IT WAS THE LOWEST
EXPENDITURE
 IN 1968.HOUSEHOLD
GOODS
COUNSUMPTION
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CONSUMPTION
 REMAINED
STEADILY
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 IN BOTH YEARS,THE
PERSENTAGE
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PERCENTAGE
 IS APPROXIMATELY 8%.
FRTHERMORE
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FURTHERMORE
, LOCALS CONSUMED 10% OF
THIEIR
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THEIR
 WEEKLY SALARY FOR HOUSING AND CLOTHING ,
FOOTWEARS
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AND FOOTWEARS
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 .THAT , WAS THE SECOND HIGHEST
EXPENDITURE
 IM 1968.
PROPOTION
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PROMOTION
 SPENT
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AN
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AN
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EQUAL PERCENTAGE
THAT IS
 8% IN
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PERCENTAGE
PERSENTAGE
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PERCENTAGE
WISE
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ON
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HOUSEHOLD
HOUSEHALL
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HOUSEHOLD
GOODS
, TRANSPORT
AS WELL AS
 PERSONAL
GOODS
 IN 1968.
ACCORDIND
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ACCORDING
 TO THE GRAPH, THE
INDIVIDUALS
 PREFER TO
SPENT
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 THEIR MONEY ON
LESUIRE
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LEISURE
 ACTIVITIES AND
GOODS
 IN 2018.PROPOTION CONSUMED HOUSING
GOODS
 AND FOOD .THE PERCENTAGE IS JUST OVER 20%. IN PERCENTAGE WISE.
THAT IS
 THE
SECOND HIGHEST
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SECOND-HIGHEST
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CATAGAREY
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CATEGORY
.
FUEL
 AND POWE ,HOUSE HLD
GOODS
 AND PERSONAL
GOODS
 . PAYS
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A LOWERST
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LOWERST
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LOWER
 PLACE IN THE WEEKLY
INCOME
 IN 2018.
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Basic structure: Change the fifth paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words individuals, income, expenditure, fuel, goods with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "graph" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fifth paragraph.
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