The chart belows gives information about how families in one country spent their weekly income in 1968 and in 2018

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THE PROVIDED BAR GRAPH ILLUSTRATES ,HOW

INDIVIDUALS

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SPENT THEIR WEEKLY

INCOME

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ON EIGHT VARIOUS

CONSUME

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CONSUMED

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PRODUCTS IN ONE NATION IN 1968 AFTER 50 YEARS. LOOKING FROM AN

OVERALL

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PERSPECTIVE IT IS READIELY

APPERENT

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APPARENT

THAT,FOOD MADE THE BIGGEST

EXPENDITURE

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WHILE

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FUEL

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AND POWER MADE THE LOWEST

EXPENDITURE

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THE

BEGINING

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BEGINNING

OF THE TIME .

MOREOVER

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,LEISURE ACTIVITIES

WAS

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THE HIGHEST PART

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THE

INCOME

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WHILE

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PERSONAL

GOODS

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AND

FUEL

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AND POWER

THE

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HAD THE

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LEAST SHARE IN THE

INCOME

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THE END OF THE PERIOD. GETTING BACK TO DETAILS,

INDIVIDUALS

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SPENT HIGHEST CONTRIBUTION OF THEIR

INCOME

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TO BUY FOOD IN 1968.

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35%IN

PERSENTAGE

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PER CENT

WISE.

INDIVIDUALS

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SPENT JUST UNDER 5% TO BUY

FUEL

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AND POWER IN THAT TIME PERIOD. AND IT WAS THE LOWEST

EXPENDITURE

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IN 1968.HOUSEHOLD

GOODS

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COUNSUMPTION

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CONSUMPTION

REMAINED

STEADILY

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IN BOTH YEARS,THE

PERSENTAGE

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PERCENTAGE

IS APPROXIMATELY 8%.

FRTHERMORE

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FURTHERMORE

, LOCALS CONSUMED 10% OF

THIEIR

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THEIR

WEEKLY SALARY FOR HOUSING AND CLOTHING ,

FOOTWEARS

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AND FOOTWEARS

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.THAT , WAS THE SECOND HIGHEST

EXPENDITURE

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IM 1968.

PROPOTION

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PROMOTION

SPENT

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EQUAL PERCENTAGE

THAT IS

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8% IN

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PERCENTAGE

PERSENTAGE

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PERCENTAGE

WISE

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apply

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HOUSEHOLD

HOUSEHALL

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HOUSEHOLD

GOODS

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, TRANSPORT

AS WELL AS

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PERSONAL

GOODS

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IN 1968.

ACCORDIND

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ACCORDING

TO THE GRAPH, THE

INDIVIDUALS

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PREFER TO

SPENT

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THEIR MONEY ON

LESUIRE

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LEISURE

ACTIVITIES AND

GOODS

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IN 2018.PROPOTION CONSUMED HOUSING

GOODS

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AND FOOD .THE PERCENTAGE IS JUST OVER 20%. IN PERCENTAGE WISE.

THAT IS

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THE

SECOND HIGHEST

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CATAGAREY

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

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Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

5 paragraphs

228 words

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The chart belows gives information about how families in one country spent their weekly income in 1968 and in 2018

Some people believe that watching big events like sports and the Olympics on TV encourage adults to exercise regularly. While others disagree that there are other effective ways of getting them to exercise. Discuss both views and give your opinion

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