The chart belows gives information about how families in one country spent their weekly income in 1968 and in 2018

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THE PROVIDED BAR GRAPH ILLUSTRATES ,HOW

INDIVIDUALS

SPENT THEIR WEEKLY

INCOME

ON EIGHT VARIOUS

CONSUME

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CONSUMED

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PRODUCTS IN ONE NATION IN 1968 AFTER 50 YEARS. LOOKING FROM AN

OVERALL

PERSPECTIVE IT IS READIELY

APPERENT

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APPARENT

THAT,FOOD MADE THE BIGGEST

EXPENDITURE

WHILE

FUEL

AND POWER MADE THE LOWEST

EXPENDITURE

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THE

BEGINING

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BEGINNING

OF THE TIME .

MOREOVER

,LEISURE ACTIVITIES

WAS

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THE HIGHEST PART

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THE

INCOME

WHILE

PERSONAL

GOODS

AND

FUEL

AND POWER

THE

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HAD THE

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LEAST SHARE IN THE

INCOME

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THE END OF THE PERIOD. GETTING BACK TO DETAILS,

INDIVIDUALS

SPENT HIGHEST CONTRIBUTION OF THEIR

INCOME

TO BUY FOOD IN 1968.

THAT IS

35%IN

PERSENTAGE

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PER CENT

WISE.

INDIVIDUALS

SPENT JUST UNDER 5% TO BUY

FUEL

AND POWER IN THAT TIME PERIOD. AND IT WAS THE LOWEST

EXPENDITURE

IN 1968.HOUSEHOLD

GOODS

COUNSUMPTION

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CONSUMPTION

REMAINED

STEADILY

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IN BOTH YEARS,THE

PERSENTAGE

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PERCENTAGE

IS APPROXIMATELY 8%.

FRTHERMORE

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FURTHERMORE

, LOCALS CONSUMED 10% OF

THIEIR

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THEIR

WEEKLY SALARY FOR HOUSING AND CLOTHING ,

FOOTWEARS

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AND FOOTWEARS

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.THAT , WAS THE SECOND HIGHEST

EXPENDITURE

IM 1968.

PROPOTION

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PROMOTION

SPENT

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EQUAL PERCENTAGE

THAT IS

8% IN

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PERCENTAGE

PERSENTAGE

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PERCENTAGE

WISE

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apply

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HOUSEHOLD

HOUSEHALL

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HOUSEHOLD

GOODS

, TRANSPORT

AS WELL AS

PERSONAL

GOODS

IN 1968.

ACCORDIND

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ACCORDING

TO THE GRAPH, THE

INDIVIDUALS

PREFER TO

SPENT

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THEIR MONEY ON

LESUIRE

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LEISURE

ACTIVITIES AND

GOODS

IN 2018.PROPOTION CONSUMED HOUSING

GOODS

AND FOOD .THE PERCENTAGE IS JUST OVER 20%. IN PERCENTAGE WISE.

THAT IS

THE

SECOND HIGHEST

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SECOND-HIGHEST

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CATAGAREY

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The chart belows gives information about how families in one country spent their weekly income in 1968 and in 2018

Some people believe that research of medicines should be directly based on human trial. Is this the right way give your opinion and discuss its advantages and disadvantages.

Some people think it would be better if the whole family (uncles, aunts, and grandparents) were involved in bringing up children rather than only parents

Research shows that business meetings, discussions and training are happening online nowadays. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

In some countries an increasing number of children are overweigh as a result of eating too much fast food. It is necessary for governments to ban selling this kind of food in schools. To what extend do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

In many countries, smoking is now illegal in public places. Many people believe that such a ban is justified. Do you agree or disagree?