The chart belows gives information about how families in one country spent their weekly income in 1968 and in 2018

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THE PROVIDED BAR GRAPH ILLUSTRATES ,HOW

INDIVIDUALS

SPENT THEIR WEEKLY

INCOME

ON EIGHT VARIOUS

CONSUME

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PRODUCTS IN ONE NATION IN 1968 AFTER 50 YEARS. LOOKING FROM AN

OVERALL

PERSPECTIVE IT IS READIELY

APPERENT

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APPARENT

THAT,FOOD MADE THE BIGGEST

EXPENDITURE

WHILE

FUEL

AND POWER MADE THE LOWEST

EXPENDITURE

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THE

BEGINING

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BEGINNING

OF THE TIME .

MOREOVER

,LEISURE ACTIVITIES

WAS

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THE HIGHEST PART

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THE

INCOME

WHILE

PERSONAL

GOODS

AND

FUEL

AND POWER

THE

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HAD THE

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LEAST SHARE IN THE

INCOME

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THE END OF THE PERIOD. GETTING BACK TO DETAILS,

INDIVIDUALS

SPENT HIGHEST CONTRIBUTION OF THEIR

INCOME

TO BUY FOOD IN 1968.

THAT IS

35%IN

PERSENTAGE

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PER CENT

WISE.

INDIVIDUALS

SPENT JUST UNDER 5% TO BUY

FUEL

AND POWER IN THAT TIME PERIOD. AND IT WAS THE LOWEST

EXPENDITURE

IN 1968.HOUSEHOLD

GOODS

COUNSUMPTION

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CONSUMPTION

REMAINED

STEADILY

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IN BOTH YEARS,THE

PERSENTAGE

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PERCENTAGE

IS APPROXIMATELY 8%.

FRTHERMORE

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FURTHERMORE

, LOCALS CONSUMED 10% OF

THIEIR

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THEIR

WEEKLY SALARY FOR HOUSING AND CLOTHING ,

FOOTWEARS

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AND FOOTWEARS

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.THAT , WAS THE SECOND HIGHEST

EXPENDITURE

IM 1968.

PROPOTION

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PROMOTION

SPENT

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EQUAL PERCENTAGE

THAT IS

8% IN

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PERCENTAGE

PERSENTAGE

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PERCENTAGE

WISE

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HOUSEHOLD

HOUSEHALL

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HOUSEHOLD

GOODS

, TRANSPORT

AS WELL AS

PERSONAL

GOODS

IN 1968.

ACCORDIND

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ACCORDING

TO THE GRAPH, THE

INDIVIDUALS

PREFER TO

SPENT

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THEIR MONEY ON

LESUIRE

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LEISURE

ACTIVITIES AND

GOODS

IN 2018.PROPOTION CONSUMED HOUSING

GOODS

AND FOOD .THE PERCENTAGE IS JUST OVER 20%. IN PERCENTAGE WISE.

THAT IS

THE

SECOND HIGHEST

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CATAGAREY

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
5Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
30Grammar mistakes
 

5 paragraphs

228 words

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Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

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The chart belows gives information about how families in one country spent their weekly income in 1968 and in 2018

Essentional vocabulary list for IELTS Writing 7+

Some people think that using mobile phones and computers has a negative effect on young people's reading and writing skills. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It more important for school children to learn local history than world history. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Some people feel that playing computer games has a negative impact on children's health and social skills. Other say it can have a positive impact on their lives. Discuss both these views.