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The two pie charts below show total world energy consumption and electricity generation for last year. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The two pie charts below show total world energy consumption and electricity generation for last year. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The two pie charts provide statistics about how much
energy
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 was generated and used
last
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 year. Units are measured in percentages. Looking from an
overall
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 perspective, it is readily apparent that the usage of
oil
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 in
energy
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 consumption had the highest numbers,
while
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 coal showed a peak for power generation. Moving to a more detailed analysis,
oil
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 and coal experienced over half of
energy
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 use in total respectively 34% and 25%, followed by the second most preferred fossil fuel type which is gas at 20%. A sharp difference can be seen between the usage and production of
oil
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 and coal, just 14 under the trend for coal,
whereas
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 the figure for
oil
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 was 5 times lower for
energy
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 production. In terms of other means of power, renewables were at 10% in
energy
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 consumption, compared to 16% of
energy
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 creation with hydro technology which was used at 2%. Atomic
energy
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 accounted for 15%
in
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of
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 the production process and made up roughly half of it for use, accompanied by other modes of
energy
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 which represented the lowest proportions for both charts.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words energy, oil with synonyms.
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