The first chart shows how energy is used in an average Australian household. THe second chart shows the greenhouse gas emissions which ressult from this energy use.
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is about 7 %.It is followed by another two causes, lighting and cooling, contributing to 4% and 2% respectively. The remaining 15% is caused by other appliances.
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, lighting and cooling emit minimal amounts, with 11% of Linking Words
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