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The graph below shows the amount of foods transported in the UK from 1974 to 2002.

The graph below shows the amount of foods transported in the UK from 1974 to 2002.
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The line graph illustrates the proportion of foods transported in the UK between 1974 and 2002.
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, road and water witnessed the highest increase in transportation usage for food during the period, whilst pipelines and rail experienced the wildest fluctuation. Road saw a significant increase of around 70
million
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tonnes
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 in 1974 to nearly 100
million
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tonnes
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 in 2002. water was in the second position and witnessed a dramatic increase of almost 40
million
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tonnes
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 in 1978 to below 60
million
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tonnes
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 in 1982 before decreasing steadily to almost 50
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 in 1998
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 increasing dramatically in 2002.
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, rail saw the wildest fluctuation during the period. Rial decreased from approximately 40 to around 30
million
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tonnes
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 in 1986 before increasing sharply to around 30
million
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tonnes
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 in 1998 to above 40
million
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tonnes
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 in 2002. The pipeline was the lowest way to transport food,
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 increased dramatically from below 20
million
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tonnes
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 in 1974 to above 20
million
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 in 1982 after that the pipeline rose slightly up to 1990 before decreasing to 20
million
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tonnes
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 in 2002.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words million, tonnes with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "almost" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "dramatic" was used 3 times.
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