The charts provide information about water consumption and residential water usage in Australia in 2004.
The bar and pie charts below provide information about the annual
water
consumption im
six cities and Correct your spelling
in
water
utilization in Australia respectively.
Overall
, Perth had the highest usage and, oppositely, Canaberra
was rated with the lowest consumption rate. Correct your spelling
Canberra
Additionally
, it is clearly seen that agriculture is the most demanding distribution.
The first thing that can be easily observed is Perth's water
usage which reached almost 300 kilolitres. By contrast
, Canaberra
had twice as Correct your spelling
Canberra
less
amount of Correct word choice
little
water
consumed and Melbourne with almost same
data. Remained Sydney, Adelaide and Brisbane are listed from the lowest to the highest in Correct article usage
the same
range
of 200 to 250 kilolitres per property.
The pie chart mentions 7 categories where Correct article usage
a range
the
agriculture held Correct article usage
apply
two thirds
of the whole chart. Add a hyphen
two-thirds
On the contrary
, mining distributes 2 per cent of annual water
. Next,
areas like households, water
supply and drainage, electricity and gas supply exploit around 8%. Remained two categories are manufacturing and others which are 2 times less than Correct your spelling
house
houses
househ
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household
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