Some people think that governments should spend money on building train and subway lines to reduce traffic congestion. Others think that better roads should be built. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Comfortability for civilians is one of the biggest

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that governments should

be considered

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since there are some ways to improve it. Some argue that they spend their resources to build public transportation systems

while

others disagree with

this

opinion. I personally claim that governments need to spend more money to create pavements than railways

because of

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reasons that I am going to mention later. On the one hand, there are a number of merits to

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train

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trains

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and

railway

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railways

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, including numerous people can use

it

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them

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to commute

their

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workplaces. Since workers tend to ride their cars to go

their

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companies, traffic has

freaquently

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frequently

been heavy, especially in the morning. To avoid

this

,

increaing

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increasing

public transportation systems is needed.

Furthermore

, it is typically more reasonable and faster than private cars, which means that people are able to save their money and time

everyday

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.

However

, some complain that heavy traffic would be settled down if

roads

became wider, which indicates that governments should try to create new or additional

roads

to allow people to drive more easily. Compared to constructing

subway

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or other public transportation, making

roads

is not only easier but

also

no need to create new bus or train schedules. If changing the schedules is

requred

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required

, it needs to be noticed

to

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a lot of

cites

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cities

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such

as companies which run a train map application. In conclusion,

while

creating new railways or subways has numerous merits that I

discribed

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described

,

outcomes

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the outcomes

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of constructing new

roads

or pavements outweigh the former

one

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apply

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.

Thus

, I believe that government should invest more money

to

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building these facilities.