The efficient functioning of society is based on rules and laws. Society would not function well if individuals were free to do whatever they wanted. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Society

Use synonyms

is a collection of

individuals

Use synonyms

. Each individual is unique and

have

Change the verb form

has

show examples

different beliefs.

The co-operation

Correct article usage

Co-operation

show examples

is necessary for a mindful

society

Use synonyms

. The common rules and laws ensure minimizing friction and increasing

efficiency

Add an article

the efficiency

show examples

of

this

Linking Words

collective process. On one hand,

freedom

Use synonyms

of choice is a great concept.

This

Linking Words

helps to incorporate

individuals

Use synonyms

with various skills to improve and contribute rather than forcing them to follow others.

For example

Linking Words

, if a

society

Use synonyms

is struggling with its current

fuctioning

Correct your spelling

functioning

,

Use synonyms

freedom

Correct article usage

the freedom

show examples

to invent helps to bring a solution to the negotiation table which improves the quality of the

overall

Linking Words

functioning. The

freedom

Use synonyms

of speech leads to expression against oppression and injustice. Appreciating

individuals

Use synonyms

for their uniqueness will increase the

overall

Linking Words

mental well-being of

individuals

Use synonyms

.

On the other

Linking Words

hand

Add a comma

hand,

show examples

freedom

Use synonyms

of choice can lead to negative consequences.

Freedom

Use synonyms

to spend their earning in their own way might lead to

lack

Correct article usage

a lack

show examples

of

self discipline

Add a hyphen

self-discipline

show examples

.

This

Linking Words

might end up in an addiction crisis. Inventions are great but

certain

Change preposition

at certain

show examples

times resources might get wasted without restrictions. Expressing your own views about

others

Change noun form

others'

other's

show examples

belief

Fix the agreement mistake

beliefs

show examples

might lead to polarization and violence between communities. The

freedom

Use synonyms

to be who you are is a

double edged

Add a hyphen

double-edged

show examples

sword. The individual should take sole responsibility for the negative outcomes inflicted upon

society

Use synonyms

. The laws should be carefully analyzed and

freedom

Use synonyms

should be given up to a certain limit where individual acts

doesn't

Change the verb form

don't

show examples

interfere

the

Change preposition

with the

show examples

social sphere.