You have recently moved to a different house. Write a letter to an English-speaking friend. In your letter •explain why you have moved •describe the new house •invite your friend to come and visit

#house #friend #•explain #•describe #•invite #visit

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Dear Harshitha, I hope

this

letter finds you well and in good health. I am writing

this

letter to let you know that I recently

did

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made

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a shift from Seattle to Florida. Guess what, I was offered a new role as a BI Developer at Bayer Crop company. You'd be surprised to hear that I got an apartment with a beach view and

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infinity pool. It's not just the apartment but the new club which

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apply

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recently opened

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downtown is a vibe to experience.

Moreover

, there are plenty of authentic

mexican

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Mexican

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restaurents

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restaurants

which are listed as

must visit

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on Google.

Although

this

place is amazing, I'd prefer

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it if

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you'd

come

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visit me as I am sure that you would love to explore

this

place together. I miss the time we spend on our

last

vacation and I am looking forward to relishing more memories with you soon. Looking forward to seeing you. Sheba.

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Task Response

Your letter effectively communicates the main points - the reason for moving, description of the new house, and inviting your friend to visit. To further improve, consider adding more details about your feelings or experiences related to the move, providing a deeper context.

Coherence and Cohesion

The structure of your letter is well-organized, with clear paragraphs for each topic. Enhancing the transitions between paragraphs could improve the flow even more.

Tone

You've successfully used a friendly and inviting tone throughout your letter, which is suitable for the context of writing to a friend.

Structure

The organization of your letter into paragraphs, each addressing a different point of the task, makes it easy to follow.

The Closing

The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.

Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.

Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

Best regards,
Warm wishes,

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

6 paragraphs

155 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

relocate
spacious
modern
residential area
homely
amenities
downsize
commute
scenic
landmarks
nostalgic
convivial gathering
housewarming
cozy
landscaped garden
architectural design
bustling neighborhood
serene environment
up-and-coming area
expansive view

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You have recently moved to a different house. Write a letter to an English-speaking friend. In your letter •explain why you have moved •describe the new house •invite your friend to come and visit

The Closing

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