You have recently moved to a different house. Write a letter to an English-speaking friend. In your letter •explain why you have moved •describe the new house •invite your friend to come and visit
Dear Harshitha,
I hope
this
letter finds you well and in good health. I am writing this
letter to let you know that I recently did
a shift from Seattle to Florida. Guess what, I was offered a new role as a BI Developer at Bayer Crop company.
You'd be surprised to hear that I got an apartment with a beach view and Verb problem
made
a
infinity pool. It's not just the apartment but the new club which Change the article
an
is
recently opened Unnecessary verb
apply
in
downtown is a vibe to experience. Change preposition
apply
Moreover
, there are plenty of authentic mexican
Change the capitalization
Mexican
restaurents
which are listed as Correct your spelling
restaurants
must visit
on Google.
Add a hyphen
must-visit
Although
this
place is amazing, I'd prefer if
you'd Correct pronoun usage
it if
come
visit me as I am sure that you would love to explore Add the particle
come to
this
place together. I miss the time we spend on our last
vacation and I am looking forward to relishing more memories with you soon.
Looking forward to seeing you.
Sheba.Submitted by praneeth2094 on
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Task Response
Your letter effectively communicates the main points - the reason for moving, description of the new house, and inviting your friend to visit. To further improve, consider adding more details about your feelings or experiences related to the move, providing a deeper context.
Coherence and Cohesion
The structure of your letter is well-organized, with clear paragraphs for each topic. Enhancing the transitions between paragraphs could improve the flow even more.
Tone
You've successfully used a friendly and inviting tone throughout your letter, which is suitable for the context of writing to a friend.
Structure
The organization of your letter into paragraphs, each addressing a different point of the task, makes it easy to follow.
The Closing
The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.
Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.
Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)
- Yours faithfully,
Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)
- Yours sincerely,
Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)
- Best regards,
- Warm wishes,