topic as countries develop, more and more people buy and use their own cars. Do the advantages of this trend for individuals outweigh the disadvantages for the environment?

In the present world, more and more people own vehicles. It seems like having your own

car

or motorcycle is a better choice than

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by public

transportations

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.

However

, in my opinion, not owning a

car

actually has more advantages and exceeds owning a

car

, and the reasons will be

elaborate

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elaborated

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in the following paragraphs by comparing the differences between owning a personal vehicle and

reling

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relying

on public transportation

,

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and

also

bringing up the environmental aspects in

this

topic.

Firstly

, public

transportations

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are well

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is

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developed

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nowadays. With more shifts and

less

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fewer

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time

gaps. they are achieving better

time

effeciency

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efficiency

.

For example

. three years before, there was a

10 minute

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time

gap between two buses,

while

it takes only 3 mins for now.

Such

great

improvement

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are diminishing the

shorcomings

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shortcomings

that public transportation used to represent.

Besides

, driving with your own cars requires extra

time

in waiting for the red lights and parking.

Thus

, public

transportations

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are

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not as

time consuming

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as usual, and in certain circumstances taking it is more convenient.

Secondly

,

tha

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the

most valuable advantage

about

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of

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public

tramportation

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transportation

is that it

substaintially

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substantially

decreases the

overall

emmisions

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emissions

compared to individuals owning vehicles. Researches show that

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driving by taking a bus or subway for your daily

commution

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commute

can decrease up to 30% of

emmision

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emission

emissions

per person per year.

Emmissions

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Emissions

are deteriorating our planet and accelerating the greenhouse effect.

Therefore

, owning a

car

can have negative impacts on

environment

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the environment

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,

while

on the other hand

, public

tranports

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transports

transport

can minimize

this

damage.

To sum up

, the advantages of using public

transports

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transport

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has

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clearly

outwiegh

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outweigh

outweighs

the ownership of individual vehicles. Comparing these two, cars have not necessarily

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in terms of

time

efficiency

,

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and

convienience

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convenience

.

Moreover

, environmental

consequence

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consequences

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should be taken into

considerations

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since personal cars are responsible for

contribute

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contributing

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to extra

pollutions

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pollution

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.