The graph below shows the percentage of Australian exports to 4 countries from 1990 to 2012

The graph below shows the percentage of Australian exports to 4 countries from 1990 to 2012
The line graph showcases the proportions of Australian exports to Japan, the US,
China
, and
India
between 1990 and 2012. From a broad perspective, it is observable that
India
and
China
experienced upward trends,
whereas
Japan and the US saw downward trends.
Moreover
,
China
demonstrated the most dramatic increase among all countries.
To begin
with,
India
and
China
started the period with a rate of 0%.
India
remained stagnant for 10 years until the rate began to climb slowly, reaching 5% in 2005.
India
managed to sustain its growth in the subsequent years until it unfortunately fell back to 5% in 2012.
China
showed its first increase in 2000, reached 5%, and continued to grow to 30% by 2012. The US began the period at 12%, followed by a decrease to 8% in 1995 before returning to its initial level in 2000. The US
then
underwent a gradual decline to 5% in 2010, with a slight increase to 6% in the same year.
Furthermore
, Japan started at the highest level in 1990 and plummeted to the lowest position by 2010.
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