The graph below shows the percentage of Australian exports to 4 countries from 1990 to 2012

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The line graph showcases the proportions of Australian exports to Japan, the US,

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, and

India

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between 1990 and 2012. From a broad perspective, it is observable that

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and

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experienced upward trends,

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Japan and the US saw downward trends.

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demonstrated the most dramatic increase among all countries.

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with,

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and

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started the period with a rate of 0%.

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remained stagnant for 10 years until the rate began to climb slowly, reaching 5% in 2005.

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managed to sustain its growth in the subsequent years until it unfortunately fell back to 5% in 2012.

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showed its first increase in 2000, reached 5%, and continued to grow to 30% by 2012. The US began the period at 12%, followed by a decrease to 8% in 1995 before returning to its initial level in 2000. The US

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underwent a gradual decline to 5% in 2010, with a slight increase to 6% in the same year.

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, Japan started at the highest level in 1990 and plummeted to the lowest position by 2010.

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The graph below shows the percentage of Australian exports to 4 countries from 1990 to 2012

Nowadays, it is getting difficult for people to enjoy their lives in cities. Why do you think this is? What can the government do to make life in cities more enjoyable?

In the past, most people lived in small villages where everyone knew everyone else. Nowadays, most people live in large cities where they only know a few people in their area.

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Some people believe that exams are an unappropriate way of measuring students performance and should be replaced by continuous assessments. Do you agree or disagree?