The maps below show the centre of a small town called Islip as it is now, and plans for its development.
The given blueprints below depict the current and future layout of Islip town
centre
.
As observed from the maps, there are some major changes, such
as the establishment of new housing, bus station, shopping centre
, car park
, and dual carriageway. The main road
would also
got
replaced by Change the verb form
get
be got
pedestarians
only footpath.
Looking more into details, the north shops got replaced by bus station, shopping Correct your spelling
pedestrians
pedestrian
centre
, car park
, and new housing, from west to east respectively. The main road
functionality would also
change, the proposed design change it into Correct article usage
a pedestarians
pedestarians
only Correct your spelling
pedestrians
pedestrian
road
. Lastly
there is a new housing between housing across from the school and the Add a comma
Lastly,
park
.
The most notable difference is the construction of dual
carriageway around Correct article usage
a dual
town
Add an article
the town
centre
for vehicle access of
Islip town Change preposition
to
centre
, this
replace
the countryside on the north side and Change the verb form
replaces
also
use
some Correct subject-verb agreement
uses
south east
Correct your spelling
southeast
park
space. The new housing also
have
Change the verb form
has
road
access into dual
carriageway.Add an article
a dual
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