The table below shows information about age, average income per person and population below poverty line in three states in USA
The table below illustrates information about age, average salary per person and
population
below the poverty line in California
, Uttal and Florida. It is important to note that teenagers in Uttal have the most teenagers than others with only 9% population
below the poverty line which is the lowest proportion in the three states. However
, this
state has the proportion of youngsters.
In California
, 17% of people are under 18 years old with 23000$ average income which is just under Florida's percentage of 16%. Moreover
, Florida in comparison with California
has a 1000$ less average income. The population
in these two states are respectively 16% and 12%.
In Utah, the most part of the population
is under 18 which is 28% and 11% bigger than California
. Elderly people in this
state are 8% which is less than two other states. Furthermore
, the average income in Uttal is less than in other places and it is only 9% of the population
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