The table below shows information about age, average income per person and population below poverty line in three states in USA
The table below illustrates information about age, average salary per person and
population
below the poverty line in Use synonyms
California
, Uttal and Florida. It is important to note that teenagers in Uttal have the most teenagers than others with only 9% Use synonyms
population
below the poverty line which is the lowest proportion in the three states. Use synonyms
However
, Linking Words
this
state has the proportion of youngsters.
In Linking Words
California
, 17% of people are under 18 years old with 23000$ average income which is just under Florida's percentage of 16%. Use synonyms
Moreover
, Florida in comparison with Linking Words
California
has a 1000$ less average income. The Use synonyms
population
in these two states are respectively 16% and 12%.
In Utah, the most part of the Use synonyms
population
is under 18 which is 28% and 11% bigger than Use synonyms
California
. Elderly people in Use synonyms
this
state are 8% which is less than two other states. Linking Words
Furthermore
, the average income in Uttal is less than in other places and it is only 9% of the Linking Words
population
.Use synonyms
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