The diagram below gives information about stages of the process of producing of olive oil.
The given flowchart presents information about making olive
oil
. Overall
, there are 6 steps in the process, beginning with picking olives
from trees and ending with olive oil
.
As is given in the graph, the first
step
is picking olives
from the tressCapitalize word
The
the next
step
is to put the olives
in the mill and press them after that separation
the Replace the word
separate
olives
and produce the olive oil
and package it in a bottle, which is the last
step
in this
flowchart.
In general, water is a factor affected in this
step
. In addition
, time and manpower are important elements that have a major influence on this
process. After going through these steps the cycle begins again and is repeated indefinitely.
To sum up
, it can clearly be seen that making olive oil
moves in normal steps, although
human factors may also
play a role in affecting the balance.Submitted by waell12 on
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