Write about the following topic. Buying things on the Internet, such as books, air popular. tickets and groceries, is becoming more and more Do the advantages of shopping in this way outveigh the disadvantages? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Nowadays, people are starting to shop online, and

this

business model is becoming more and more common. In the near future, we might not have physical

store

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anymore. It is agreed that digital shopping has more positive impacts than negative shortcomings.

This

opinion will be analyzed by discussing the

time

efficiency improvements from developing

e-commerce

, and the environmental aspects

in

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this

topic.

Firstly

, the most attractive point of buying things online is it saves us

time

.

For example

, going

groceries

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grocery

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shopping usually takes me half an hour to one hour,

some times

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sometimes

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even

cost

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costing

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me over one and a half an hour.

This

includes driving to the supermarket, picking the ingredients,

checkout

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, and at

last

,

drive

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back home and

organize

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things in my kitchen.

However

, In

this

present world,

time

is money, and we should rethink

about

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the way we allocate our 24 hours. In

this

situation, doing groceries online can save us two to three hours at least per week, which is clearly providing an

opportuntiy

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opportunity

for us to make

a

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better use of our precious

time

.

Thus

, shopping online allows us to redistribute our

time

and attention

on

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to

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more valuable tasks.

Secondly

, online and offline shopping is very different in terms of logistics aspects.

While

physical shopping requires

merchandises

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on site

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,

e-commerce

doesn't.

For instance

, in

normal

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shopping process, a book will be

passing

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several

houseware

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before entering

physical

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the physical

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store, and at

last

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last,

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brought back home by customers.

However

,

e-commerce

can save us all these shipments and send the exact amount of books directly to

customer

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the customer

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.

According to

researches

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,

e-commerce

reduces

the

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emissions

up

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to 25% per product.

Therefore

,

chosing

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choosing

online shopping can decrease carbon

emission

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emissions

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and can contribute to diminishing negative impacts on climate change.

To sum up

, digital commerce improves our lives in both

time

-efficiency and environmental aspects. Not only we

are benefited

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from gaining

extre

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extra

times

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time

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, but

also

taking

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an

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action to save our planet.