The table and charts below give information on the police budget for 2017 and 2018 in one area of Britain. The table shows where the money came from and the charts show how it was distributed. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The table provides information about the sources of police
fundings
, Fix the agreement mistake
funding
whereas
the pie charts illustrate to which sectors money
was allocated in 2017 and 2018 in the
particular area of Britain. Correct article usage
a
Overall
, most of the investments came from the local government and a large amount of money
was spent on officers
and staff’s revenues in both years.
Change noun form
officers'
officer's
According to
the table, an
Correct article usage
the
overall
number of the fundings
constituted over Fix the agreement mistake
funding
the
300 million pounds in both 2017 and 2018. Correct article usage
apply
While
over a half of the total money
was allocated from the national government, the local taxes were significantly lower than that of the
certain authorities, comprising only a third of the total Correct article usage
apply
fundings
in the given years. Meanwhile, other resources Fix the agreement mistake
funding
such
as grants remained almost unchanged, which
the figure Correct your spelling
with
accounted
for 38 million.
Regarding the pie charts, it is obviously seen that the employees’ salaries dominated the spending Wrong verb form
accounting
money
with around 70%. In terms of buildings and transport expenditures, the figure maintained the same level at 17%; however
, technological expenses experienced a slight increase from 8% to 14% in 2018.Submitted by writingbhos on
Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.
Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "overall".
▼
Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 67%.
▼
Vocabulary: Replace the words money with synonyms.
▼
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
▼
Vocabulary: The word "charts" was used 2 times.
▼
Vocabulary: The word "table" was used 2 times.
▼
Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 2 times.
▼