The graphs show the number of books borrowed from four village libraries

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The line graph illustrates information about the number of

books

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borrowed from particular village libraries in different months and the pie chart highlights information about how many types of

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borrowed

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, it can be clearly seen that the different

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borrowed including West Eaton, Sutton Wood and Church Mount increased, and Fiction had the highest percentage among these

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in 4 months. Looking at the details, as regards the line graph, The book of Sutton Wood borrowed as 250 in June and fluctuated. It

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reached a peak of 300 in September 2014.

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Ryeslip borrowed with 300 in June,

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decreased sharply to 175 in September. As for the pie chart, Fiction was the highest borrowed at 43% over 4 months compared with Self-Help. The types of

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borrowed as History and Science have the same share of 14%,

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Biography had 14% of all

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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.

Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 67%.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 8.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

148 words

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The graphs show the number of books borrowed from four village libraries

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One of your friends wants to apply for a job at a summer school camp as a sports trainer. Write a letter to the camp manager to recommend your friend. Say how well you know your friend Describe the qualifications and experience that your has Explain why your friend would be suitable for this job.

Some people think that countries should limit the amount of food that they import and mainly eat products from their own country. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Children today are too dependent on computers and electronic entertainment. It would be better for them to be outside playing sports and taking part in more traditional pastimes than spending all day indoors. Do you agree or disagree with this statement?

The most important aim of science ought to be to improve people’s lives. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Rising university fees and scarce employment prospects for graduates have led some people to say that universities should not teach arts subjects, like philosophy and history, and only offer practical degree courses that maximise chances of employment. To what extent do you agree or disagree?