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The graphs show the number of books borrowed from four village libraries

The graphs show the number of books borrowed from four village libraries
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The line graph shows the
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 of
books
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 obtained from four village libraries for four months,
while
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 the pie chart gives data regarding the kinds of
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 borrowed including self-help, fiction, history, science and biography.
Overall
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, it can be clearly seen that the
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 of
books
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 borrowed from West Eaton and Church Mount was the same in June and September.
Additionally
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, fiction
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 were the most popular. Looking into details, the
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 of
books
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 borrowed from West Eaton and Church Mount observed similar and upward trends, starting with 50 and ending with 150. The figure for Sutton Wood underwent a fluctuation. The count was 250 in June. It reached a peak of 300 in September,
although
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 the figure declined to 100 in August. Ryeslip Library gave people 300
books
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 at the beginning of the period,
then
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 the
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 of
books
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 decreased to just below 200 in September. Turning to the pie chart, the most prevalent section was fiction, accounting for 43%. 19% of people who borrowed
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 from libraries preferred biographies. The percentages of self-help and history
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 were the same rate, making up 14%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words number, books with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "number of" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "gives" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 4 times.
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