The three pie charts below show the changes in annual spending by a particular UK school in 1981, 1991, and 2001 Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant
The different pie charts present
yearly
spending of a specific UK school in 3 separate years: 1981, 1991 and 2001.
It can be seen in the chart that Correct article usage
the yearly
teachers
salaries made up the biggest portion of the annual Change noun form
teachers'
teacher's
expense
Fix the agreement mistake
expenses
while
insurance spending was the least accounted for. No expenditure constituted more than half of the percentage over the Linking Words
2 decade
changes.
Add a hyphen
2-decade
To begin
with, there had been a 10% increase in teachers’ Linking Words
paying
, standing at one half of the portion in 1991 Replace the word
pay
while
experiencing a 5% decrease in 2001. Meanwhile, other Linking Words
labor’s
salaries constituted about a quarter in the first 2 different yearsChange the spelling
labour’s
,
but Remove the comma
apply
leveled
off to 15% by 2001.
Change the spelling
levelled
Furthermore
, insurance accounted for no more than 10 % throughout the distinct period. Linking Words
Then
, furniture and tools went down from 15% in 1981 to Linking Words
one third
of it in 1991 and accounted for about four times more in the Add a hyphen
one-third
last
term. Linking Words
Lastly
, Linking Words
in
1981 to 1991 resources like books gradually rose from 15% to 20%, though drastically fell to 9% in 2001.Change preposition
from
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