The three pie charts below show the changes in annual spending by a particular UK school in 1981, 1991, and 2001 Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant

The three pie charts below show the changes in annual spending by a particular UK school in 1981, 1991, and 2001

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant
The different pie charts present
yearly
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the yearly
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spending of a specific UK school in 3 separate years: 1981, 1991 and 2001. It can be seen in the chart that
teachers
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teachers'
teacher's
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salaries made up the biggest portion of the annual
expense
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expenses
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while
insurance spending was the least accounted for. No expenditure constituted more than half of the percentage over the
2 decade
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changes.
To begin
with, there had been a 10% increase in teachers’
paying
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, standing at one half of the portion in 1991
while
experiencing a 5% decrease in 2001. Meanwhile, other
labor’s
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labour’s
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salaries constituted about a quarter in the first 2 different years
,
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but
leveled
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off to 15% by 2001.
Furthermore
, insurance accounted for no more than 10 % throughout the distinct period.
Then
, furniture and tools went down from 15% in 1981 to
one third
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of it in 1991 and accounted for about four times more in the
last
term.
Lastly
,
in
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1981 to 1991 resources like books gradually rose from 15% to 20%, though drastically fell to 9% in 2001.
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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Annual spending
  • Expenditure categories
  • Allocation
  • Trend analysis
  • Significant increase/decrease
  • Budget allocation strategy
  • Inflation-adjusted
  • Future implications
  • Educational institutions
  • Technological resources
  • Maintenance and operations
  • Comparative analysis
  • Fiscal management
  • Resource allocation
  • Strategic planning
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