The chart below contains information provided by Australia's tertiary institutions about the percentage of male and female students who enrolled in different subjects in 1995.

The chart below contains information provided by Australia's tertiary institutions about the percentage of male and female students who enrolled in different subjects in 1995.
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A glance at the bar chart gives the gender proportion of the enrollment in eight different courses in 1995 and the information was provided by Australia's tertiary Institutions.
Overall
, there were four subjects including Arts and Humanities, Health, Education and Business Studies the percentages of female
students
were superior to that of male
students
, whilst the rest four subjects had the reverse results.
According to
the information shown in the bar chart, there were 18% of male
students
chose the subject of engineering which was 15% more than the figure for female ones by 3%.
By contrast
, 15% of the female pupils enrolled on the Health course
while
there were only 4% of male pupils enrolled
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.
Besides
, the Art and Humanities subject was the most popular one for the
students
as it had
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30%of
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18% of females and 12% of males which was the most among the 8 courses. What should be particularly mentioned is that the gender distribution of the Accounting and Economics subjects was relatively balanced by 12% of male
students
and 11% of female ones.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words students with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "information" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • tertiary institutions
  • enrolment
  • engineering
  • information technology
  • nursing
  • gender roles
  • societal expectations
  • suitability
  • caregiving roles
  • job market
  • business studies
  • gender distribution
  • gender inclusion policies
  • workplace diversity
  • gender stereotypes
  • historical trends
  • percentages
  • subjects
  • gender imbalance
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