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The graph below shows average carbon dioxide (CO2) emissions per person in the United Kingdom, Sweden, Italy, and Portugal between 1967 and 2007. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below shows average carbon dioxide (CO2) emissions per person in the United Kingdom, Sweden, Italy, and Portugal between 1967 and 2007. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The line chart illustrates the variation in carbon dioxide (CO2)
emissions
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 per capita in four European countries from 1967 to 2007.
Overall
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,
it is clear that
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 the United Kingdom and Sweden witnessed a decline in
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,
whereas
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 Italy and Portugal exhibited a consistent upward trend.
To begin
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 with, the UK experienced a reduction in
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 from approximately 11 to 9 metric
tonnes
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, despite maintaining the highest
emissions
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 levels throughout the 40-year period.
Subsequently
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, Sweden
initially
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 saw an increase in CO2
emissions
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 from around 9 to slightly above 11 metric
tonnes
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 over a decade before experiencing a significant decrease to about 5 metric
tonnes
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 in 2007.
Conversely
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, Italy and Portugal displayed a significant rise in
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 during the initial years of the period under review. In 1967, Italy's
emissions
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 per capita stood at around 4 metric
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, escalating to over 8 by the end of the period.
In contrast
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, Portugal, which started with the lowest
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 at under 2 metric
tonnes
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, still recorded relatively low
emissions
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 levels below 6 metric
tonnes
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.
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