The pie charts show the sources of electricity in the four countries from 2003 to 2008. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and making comparisons where relevant.

The pie charts show the sources of electricity in the four countries from 2003 to 2008. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and making comparisons where relevant.
The pie charts illustrate the percentage of usage of different sources of electricity produced in four
countries
between the years 2003 and 2008. India hit first place with 82
percent
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in using of fossil fuels and in the next place Vietnam by 56
percent
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is a big user of fossil fuel to produce electricity,
moreover
two other
countries
by
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any reasons are not
following
this
way(fossil fuels) to produce
power
and their contribution is less than 5
percent
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.
On the other hand
Noroco by 95
percent
steps in first place for the utilization of hydropower. Sweden and Vietnam in order by 52 and 44
percent
are in close competition together, but India by 14
percent
is not even a competitive opponent in
this
matter.
Lastly
, Sweden with a 44
percent
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contribution to nuclear
power
is an undefeated rival in these data, and India by 4
percent
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seems to be a toddler in nuclear
power
,
although
two others have not even moved forward to consider
this
kind of
power
source.
Overall
, based on data on pie charts, in progressive or semi-progressive
countries
utilization of fossil fuels is going to be less considered in comparison to third-world
countries
due to
the non-renewable feature of
this
type of energy.
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