the diagram below shows the manufacturing process for makin sugar from sugar cane.

The illustration demonstrates how

sugar

is made from

sugar

canes

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, there are 7 steps included in the

sugar making

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sugar-making

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process, first two of them

happens

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in

natural

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a natural

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place, and the rest are

being

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held by human force and certain

equipments

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. The origin plant of

the

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sugar

named

sugar

cane grows in its natural habitat for a year to year and a half as the first

step

,

then

it is

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collected by a harvesting vehicle

such

as a tractor or

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cut by human

labor

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, as the second

step

, and after the collecting the canes,

sugar

sticks are

then

placed in

a mechanical equipment

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mechanical equipment

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for juicing

Liquid

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of the canes is purified by a filter named limestone as the fourth

step

. In order to make the syrup out of the purified liquid, it is

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heated to evaporate the water in it and

then

a fan separates the crystals from the liquid

and

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this

sixth stage is called centrifuge and the crystals dry and cool by waiting in a cup as the

last

step

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