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The table below gives information about the daily cost of water per person in five different countries.

The table below gives information about the daily cost of water per person in five different countries.
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The table shows the cost of the least
amount
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 of
water
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 required per person for a day and the proportion compared to average income in five different countries, which include Tanzania, Uganda, Pakistan, the United Kingdom and the United States.
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, the United States has the lowest cost and percentage of people's wages,
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 African nations have more impact on daily income as they have the most expensive rates among the listed countries To be more precise, daily
water
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 usage costs slightly less than a dollar in the US, which has a minimal impact of 0.006%.
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, the UK has the second most affordable rate with 1.3 cents for the
amount
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 of
water
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 used in a day, which is
also
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 the country with less than 1%.
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, in Uganda, people are charged 4.1 cents for the
amount
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 of
water
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 for a day, which accounts for 3.2% of the nation's average wage.
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, the Tanzanian people pay the highest
amount
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 for the
water
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 with 6.4 cents or above 5% of daily income.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words amount, water with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 4 times.
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