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The table below gives information about the amount of beef exported in five different countries in 2012, 2014 and 2016. Summerise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The table below gives information about the amount of beef exported in five different countries in 2012, 2014 and 2016. Summerise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The table depicts the total
beef
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 production supplied by five nations, including
Japan
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, Switzerland,
Brazil
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 Norway, and Uruguay between 2012 and 2016. In general,
Brazil
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 and
Japan
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 tended to accelerate the process of producing meat to transport abroad over the period shown,
while
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 the remaining countries had an opposite or stable trend. Notably,
Japan
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's
beef
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 exports grew in leaps and bounds during the same time. Between 2012 and 2016,
Brazil
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 and
Japan
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 underwent an uptrend in exporting
beef
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.
Whereas
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Brazil
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 only experienced a slight change, rising from 125,465 to 137,650
tonnes
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,
Japan
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 witnessed an exponential increase in the volume of
beef
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 exports, with the figure fluctuating between 225 and 1005
tonnes
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.
Due to
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this
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,
Brazil
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 was the leading
beef
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 exporter, and
Japan
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 was a new emerging meat provider in the market.
On the contrary
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,
although
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 Uruguay was the second-largest
beef
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 exporter, there was no relative change from 2012 to 2016, with the volume varying about 43,000
tonnes
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.
Similarly
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, the amount of
beef
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 supplied by Switzerland was relatively stable, at approximately 22
tonnes
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 during the same period. Noticeably, Norway's meat export amount changed considerably. In 2012, the
beef
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 export volume was relatively low, only 34
tonnes
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.
However
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,
this
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 number increased almost threefold over the following two years before hitting the bottom in 2016, decreasing to only 17
tonnes
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.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words beef, japan, brazil, tonnes with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "change" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "stable" was used 2 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • export levels
  • fluctuations
  • substantial increase/decrease
  • economic factors
  • trade policies
  • demand
  • comparative analysis
  • notable change
  • consistent trend
  • market share
  • dominant exporter
  • sharp decline/increase
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