The charts below show the average percentage in typical meals of three types of nutrients, all of which may be unhealthy if eaten too much. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The charts below show the average percentage in typical meals of three types of nutrients, all of which may be unhealthy if eaten too much.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The pie charts indicate the proportion of several ingredients that are being used in regular dishes, which might have negative impacts on the population's hygiene status.
Overall
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, the majority of these materials are included in dinner meals
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for sugar a significant percentage could be found in
snacks
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To begin
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with, Sodidum has the highest figure for dinner at 43% and the lowest amount of
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ingredient is equal in both breakfast and
snacks
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at 14%,
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, the second order of
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type is captured by lunch at 26%. Saturated fat has a dramatic proportion in dinner meals
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the lowest amount that measured is in mornings dishes at 16% ,
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, the afternoon food has 26 per cent of
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figure and with a slight reduction the
snacks
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stay in third place by 21%.
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, the extra sweets
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a noticeable amount in
snacks
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with 42% which is the highest percentage among other meals,
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, at night serves
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figure measured at 23% and for two other serves lunch and breakfast remained at 19% and 16% respectively.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
Vocabulary: Replace the words snacks with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 2 times.
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