The maps below show an industrial area in the town of Norbiton, and planned future development of the site.

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industrial place to the east of Norbiton and redevelopment plans.

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, it can be seen that the main goal of

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plan is to redevelop into a residential neighbourhood, with additional housing and other supporting facilities. Currently, there is a roundabout that connects a southern and an eastern

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, with several factories in the area that are to be removed in the redevelopment. The area around the eastern

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is to be for housing, a school

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, and a playground to the north. Another

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is planned to be added north from the roundabout and over a river, with housing along the western side of the

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. The farmland north of the river is to be replaced by additional housing where a

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parallel to the river is to be constructed and linked to the northbound

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. There are

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plans to construct another

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northwest

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the roundabout. More housing is to be built along one side and

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. To the southwest of the roundabout, shops are planned to be constructed. Across the street to the southeast is to be a medical

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. A second roundabout is

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to be added where the south

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currently meets the main

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in a T-intersection.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

217 words

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The maps below show an industrial area in the town of Norbiton, and planned future development of the site.

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Today, there are many advertisements aimed at children, such as advertisements fir toys and snacks. Some people think that advertisements aimed at children should be banned. To what extent do you agree or disagree.

Because of traffic and housing problems in the cities, the government encourages business to move to the rural area. Do you think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

Individuals can do nothing to improve the environment; only governments and large companies can make a difference. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.