The maps below show an industrial area in the town of Norbiton, and planned future development of the site.

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The given concepts illustrate a

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industrial place to the east of Norbiton and redevelopment plans.

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, it can be seen that the main goal of

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plan is to redevelop into a residential neighbourhood, with additional housing and other supporting facilities. Currently, there is a roundabout that connects a southern and an eastern

road

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, with several factories in the area that are to be removed in the redevelopment. The area around the eastern

road

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is to be for housing, a school

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, and a playground to the north. Another

road

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is planned to be added north from the roundabout and over a river, with housing along the western side of the

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. The farmland north of the river is to be replaced by additional housing where a

road

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parallel to the river is to be constructed and linked to the northbound

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. There are

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plans to construct another

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northwest

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the roundabout. More housing is to be built along one side and

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this

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road

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. To the southwest of the roundabout, shops are planned to be constructed. Across the street to the southeast is to be a medical

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. A second roundabout is

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to be added where the south

road

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currently meets the main

road

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in a T-intersection.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

217 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

industrial area
development
infrastructure
manufacturing
facilities
transition
planning
commercial
residential
renovation
urban planning
sustainability
environmental impact
local economy
rejuvenation
construction
modernization
accessibility
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The maps below show an industrial area in the town of Norbiton, and planned future development of the site.

Some feel that governments should prioritize healthcare instead of other important areas. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays many people prefer to shop in supermarkets rather than small shops or local markets. Is this positive or negative development? Discuss and give your opinion.

Some people believe that handwriting is no longer useful in the modern world and should not be taught in schools. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Some experts believe that when a country is already rich, any additional increase in economic wealth does not make its citizens any more satisfied. To what extent do you agree or disagree?