The graph gives information about changes in the birth anddeath rates in new zealand between 1901 and 2101.

The graph illustrates population growth within births and deaths in New Zealand from 1901 to 2101. Generally speaking, birth rates have better results of

leap

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a leap

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between 1901 to 1961.

However

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However,

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starting from 1981 reproductivity faces

downfall

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a downfall

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.

On the other hand

, death records are culminated in exact years. In common, information about

new borns

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have

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low

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a low

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increase of 20 in 1901. Meanwhile,

this

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statistics reached the vertex around 1961 with 65. Unfortunately

at the end

of the period birth amount drop almost 20 within 20 years of difference. It is possible to see irregular fluctuations in 1981-2021.

In contrast

, amount of people that died beginning of the timeline was closer to its lowest with 10. Gradually,

intermittent

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rise lead death factor

surpass

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its comparison ,

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, turns out that both scales

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49 for

both

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in 2041.

Peak

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The peak

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of the ratio appears from 2050-2060

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and remains steady for the rest of the years.