[ ] An increasing number of people are choosing cosmetic surgery/ plastic surgery. Why do people have operations to change the way they look? Do you think this is a positive or negative development?
Nowadays, the rise of plastic
surgery
is prominent in almost all countries and even those as young as teenagers opted
to change their natural facial features Wrong verb form
opt
especially
in Add the comma(s)
, especially
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first-world
first world
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first-world
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countries
country
as long as they have the capacity to finance Fix the agreement mistake
countries
this
expensive procedure..
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.
...
To begin
with, those who have physical issues about what they look like mostly choose to do cosmetic surgery
to build self confidence
and Add a hyphen
self-confidence
self esteem
. Many Add a hyphen
self-esteem
people
are often being bullied because of their appearances that
is the reason why they resort to Correct pronoun usage
which
surgery
. For instance
, those who have an imperfect set of teeth such
as overbite or underbite will go through the process of wearing braces and for some will do orthodontic surgery
. This
help
improve their views about themselves.
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helps
In addition
, there are those who only want to enhance their health status through plastic surgery
. This
individual did not have any alternative choice unless
to undergo the knife. Correct word choice
but
For example
, people
who have breathing problems related to nasal will ungerdo
cosmetic Correct your spelling
undergo
underdo
surgery
thus
alleviate
their suffering.
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alleviating
Furthermore
, due to
societys
Correct your spelling
society's
society
norm
, Fix the agreement mistake
norms
people
tend to alter their physical appearance. There are people
who easily get tempted to do so because of how they perceive this
as the latest trend and many are doing it. It becomes a normal operation. Such
as, in korea
, having a surgical for Change the capitalization
Korea
double
eyelid has been a normal trendCorrect article usage
a double
in
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apply
them
even Correct pronoun usage
apply
such
a young age.
In conclusion, I believe it depends on personal perspective about cosmetic Change preposition
at such
surgery
. It can be positive
or negative impact. If it health Add an article
a positive
related
it would be beneficial to the person but if it is because Correct your spelling
health-related
for
the sake of trend and no financial capacity to sustain the Change preposition
of
surgery
, this
would become a burden.Submitted by jevilla1188 on
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