The most important aim of science should be to improve people's lives. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

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Nowadays, an increasing number of people are concerned about the

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, the most essential target of

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is to prompt the

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of human beings.

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is a controversial issue. From my perspective, I don’t think

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a given argument can be justified.

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with, it is true that

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can promote our

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since it is convenient for us to live.

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, there are

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of transportation at present which ere not exist before. It

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a lot of time and

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substitute methods to travel with the development of

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. When residents go to work, if

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they may change

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underground.

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science

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can change our

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life

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and let us live better.

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science

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also

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can explore something that we don’t know now.

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is the same critical as improving people’s lives. When we find out some

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truths

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is necessary for people either, especially for the future.

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, some

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research the universe, which can not enhance the quality of

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, but it is crucial

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people.

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, exploring the

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as the universe is as important as

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lives. As far as I am concerned

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can increase our quality of

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can explore some unknown things.

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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

233 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

crucial role
technological advancements
medical discoveries
life-changing inventions
innovations
solutions to human problems
enhancing quality of life
improvement of healthcare
transportation
communication
agriculture
energy sectors
eradication of diseases
prolongation of life expectancy
global challenges
climate change
overpopulation
food security
developed world
underprivileged communities

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The most important aim of science should be to improve people's lives. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

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