The maps below show the changes that have taken place in Meadowside village and Fonton, a neighbouring town, since 1962.

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The three different diagrams

indicateMeadowside

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indicate

town

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the town

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and Fonton, a neighbouring village layout and how it has changed for the years

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apply

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1962,1985, and the present. By comparing the three maps,

it is clear that

this

place has undergone diverse development

along with

improvements which

including

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the construction of

new

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the new

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hotel, a business park, and a supermarket. Before the development,

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in 1962

in1962

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in 1962

, the layout of

village

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the village

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seems

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very simple and underdeveloped

while

in 1985, two roads

added

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were added

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and

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a leisure

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leisure

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a leisure

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complex entre

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built

builted

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built

near the road. Next to the leisure building,

housing

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a housing

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area was

builted

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built

and

accros

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across

the street we can

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store

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a store

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. By looking at the

last

diagram,

it is clear that

diverse infrastructure had

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been build

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build

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for

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instance,

hotel

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hotels

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and

station

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stations

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, and

park

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parks

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.The hotel and

stastion

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station

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are

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located centre of the village and

busniss

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business

park is sited

south

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the south

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part of the map.

In addition

, one more train road has

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been build

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build

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Furthermore

, the area was entirely expanded.

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The maps below show the changes that have taken place in Meadowside village and Fonton, a neighbouring town, since 1962.

In some countries, even though the rates of serious crimes are decreasing, people feel less safe than ever before. What do you think are the causes of this problem and what measures could be taken to solve it?

All children should study a foreign language in school, starting in the earlist grades. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Some say that because many people are living much longer, the age at which people retire from work should be raised considerably. To what extent do you agree or disagree?