The diagram illustrates the process that is used to manufacture bricks for the building industry.
Demonstrated in the infographic is information pertaining to the procedure of making
bricks
. From an observational perspective, it is a simple process, commencing with clay
moving through conventional stages to make bricks
to culminate with a completed product ready for the building industry.
The procedure commences for most brick production when clay
is Add an article
the clay
digged
by the digger, Correct your spelling
dug
then
, goes through a roller after being put on metal
grid. Add an article
a metal
Next,
all clay making
goes through a mixed stage with the synthesis of sand and water in order to create a liquid-solid mixture. The following steps involve the combination being shaped by mould or being cut by Add a hyphen
clay-making
wire
cutter.
Preparing Correct article usage
a wire
bricks
for production is the focus of the latter steps in the sequence. All bricks
will be dried in drying
oven Correct article usage
a drying
about
24 hours to 48 hours. Change preposition
for about
Next,
brick production are
heated by kiln. At Change the verb form
is
this
stage, there are two degree
that Change to a plural noun
degrees
bricks
will be heated in
Change preposition
at
moderate
level and Correct article usage
a moderate
high
level. Correct article usage
a high
Then
, they are colded
Correct your spelling
cooled
scolded
by
Change preposition
in
cooling
chamber. The whole process will be completed when Correct article usage
a cooling
clay
have
turned into Change the verb form
has
bricks
and packaging to ready
for delivery.Add a missing verb
be ready
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