Nowadays, instead of locally sourced produce, many supermarkets sell a variety of imported foods from all around the world. Does this advantage outweigh the disadvantage?
These days increasing the very strong local items. All supermarkets sell many
products
and foods from all around the world. it becomes a country
with more cons. In this
essay, I will discuss it.
On the one hand, in the countries bringing local foods it is can bond the government and other local countries. It
main case Change the pronoun
Its
as
is the Correct word choice
apply
country
's the
product goes to decrease very fast. Correct article usage
apply
Therefore
, the country
's people
's economic difficulties arise. For instance
, my causing brother has a chicken farm. He earns money from chicken eggs
. Our government brings the eggs
from India. For a cheap amount of money it.As a result
, our country
's people
purchase Indian eggs
. That's why, my brother's business is lost. Moreover
, eggs
are very expired and they put up the eggs
some comical and color. However
, people
who eat these eggs
have some stomach problems and they have to be admitted to the hospital. Therefore
, bringing the local product affected in many ways.
On the other hand
, if the government makes a decision to Bring local products
it can improve both the contest relationship and the economy of the country
become increases. For example
, some people
buy dry fish from a pure very cheap and they will all their expensive prices. It can be both country
's bond develop and there for our country
products
people
do not buy.
In conclusion, These days countries people
buy local products
from another country
so people
do not get our product. Therefore
, some health issues and they have a variety of problems this
way.Submitted by ma.ushamanu1024 on
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