Completing university education is thought by some to be the best way to get a job. On the other hand, other people think that getting experience and development soft skill in more important Discus both views and give your opinion?
Nowadays a group of people think the correct way to get a
job
is to acquire a university degree, Use synonyms
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essay will talk about either side.
On the one hand, completing tertiary education is Linking Words
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recommended
job
. Use synonyms
This
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field
can lead to many opportunities in the respective Use synonyms
field
. Young students through universities get Use synonyms
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to many workshops and classes which will help them hone their knowledge. Add an article
the privilege
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, in a recent survey conducted by The Times of India, most Linking Words
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companies hire employees based on their level of education in the required Correct article usage
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field
.
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On the other hand
, developing soft skills and Linking Words
hands on
experience can increase confidence and help young people to approach their work comfortably, it can help students identify their talents and choose the appropriate work for them. Add a hyphen
hands-on
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students at a young age are trained in a particular Remove the comma
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field
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work place
. Correct your spelling
workplace
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business man
named Barry AllanCorrect your spelling
businessman
,
mentioned in an interview that he started sales right after graduating high school and that Remove the comma
apply
lead
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such
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In conclusion, both obtaining Change the spelling
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apply
becoming
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well established
individual in your Add a hyphen
well-established
job
, the decision should be taken after properly contemplating and researching the requirements of the Use synonyms
job
that you are interested in choosing.Use synonyms
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Task response
Ensure balance in discussing both views before stating your opinion to provide a comprehensive analysis.
Coherence and cohesion
Consider varying your sentence structures more to enhance readability and flow.
Task achievement
Integrate more specific examples to strengthen your arguments and make them more convincing.
Introduction
Effectively introduced the topic and outlined both perspectives along with your opinion.
Example use
Used relevant examples to support your points, demonstrating good understanding of the topic.
Conclusion
Your conclusion effectively summarizes the essay, reiterating your personal stance.
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite