Many people say that the only way to guarantee getting a good job is to complete a course of university education. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

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among many

people

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that having a

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bachelor

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degree

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is the only way to achieve their

dream

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job

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. I

am completely disagree

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with

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argument, I

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people

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can still get their

dream

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jobs

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without having a university

degree

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.

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the current education curriculum

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already

place

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a pathway for

student

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a student

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to equip them with

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a necessary

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skill

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for their future

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. In a vocational

school

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school,

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the

students

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already learned and doing field practices

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a trusted

instituion

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institution

. As a teacher in vocational

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school,

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I have had the experience to become a mentor and supervise

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pograms

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programs

. From those experiences, I have the confidence that my

students

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already have the

skills

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and

knowledge

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to achieve their

dream

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jobs

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.

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one of my

students

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have

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an intern

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in a

logistic

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company and developed a very good skill and

knowledge

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, and

know

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now

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he has a

fulltime

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job

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in that company. So from my own

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, I have concluded that having

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a bachelor

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bachelor

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degree

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is not necessary

for

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acquire a

job

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.

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in

this

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modern era, technology has

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the main source of information to

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a necessary skill and

knowledge

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for a

job

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. At

this

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very

moment

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students

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can go to the internet and

looking

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for a particular

skills

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or

knowledge

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that they

needed

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for their

job

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. There are a lot of free

platform

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platforms

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in

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the internet that can

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the common

people

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with the

skills

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and

knowledge

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for the

job

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,

this

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is more simple

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then

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than

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have

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having

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to spend a huge amount of money

in

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university.

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addition

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the government has already started to support and provide their own free platform to equip common or uneducated

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with the necessary

skills

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and

knowledge

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for the

job

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requirement.

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ministry of

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job

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affair

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has a website for everyone without any

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bachelor

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degree

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to

acquired

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a

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very prominent

skills

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in certain

field

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. In conclusion, anyone even the uneducated, can have their

dream

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jobs

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as long as they use the current vocational schools or

using

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use

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technology

such

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as

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the internet

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internet

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and computer,

in addition

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having

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a bachelor

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bachelor

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bachelor's

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degree

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is not necessary to have your

dream

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jobs

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job

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.