The graph below shows the proportion of Australians who had eaten ethnic cuisines from other countries from 1985 to 2010.
The given line graph illustrates how many
Australian
eat various national cuisines of three countries during the time Correct your spelling
Australians
period
from 1985 to 2010. Overall
, in
the beginning of the Change the preposition
at
period
Italian dishes were the most popular among 2 other cuisines, Add a comma
period,
while
by the end of Correct article usage
the period
period
Thai food experienced the highest percentage of people who Add a comma
period,
prefer
it. The figures of people who chose Chinese cuisine increased slightly over the same time Wrong verb form
preferred
period
.
According to
the graph, in 1985 year the figures for people who prefer Italian food accounted for around 9%. Then
there was a rise to 15% in 1995, and after that
Add a comma
that,
this
percentage declined slightly by 2% in 2005 before jumping to about 23% in 2010. Meanwhile, the figures for the Australian who had eaten Chinese food gradually increase
over time from around 8% and reached a peak of approximately 23% in 2010.
Thai cuisine began from the lowest figure around 5% and fell slightly to 3% in 1995. Wrong verb form
increased
After
this
, the percentage had a fairly steady growth to roughly 8% in 2005. The it
climbed significantly to 27% Remove the article
It
to
the end of Change preposition
by
period
and seemed the most popular choice in 2010.Add an article
the period
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