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The bar chart below shows data on top four coffee producing countries in the world from 2011 to 2013. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparison where relevant.

The bar chart below shows data on top four coffee producing countries in the world from 2011 to 2013. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparison where relevant.
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The bar chart provides information about how many details on four
coffee
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 inducers worldwide, namely Brazil, Vietnam, Indonesia, and Colombia between 2011 and 2013.
Overall
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, there was an increase in the volume produced from the top four
coffee
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-producing nations; meanwhile, a rise moderately being seen in Indonesia and Colombia.
In addition
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, Brazil generally had the highest figures throughout the
period
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. At the beginning of the
period
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, the number of
coffee
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 generated in Brazil started at over 40000
thousand
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units
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, after which it saw a progressive growth to upward of 50000
thousand
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units
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 in 2012,
then
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 dropped to less than 50000 in 2013.
Conversely
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, the figure for Vietnam decreased in 2012, followed by a significant increase to peak at shy of 30000
thousand
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units
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at the end
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 of the
period
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. Nearly 10000
thousand
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units
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 of
coffee
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 were produced in Indonesia in 2011, before reaching a peak at just over 10000 in 2012. From there, there will be no fluctuation in the following years. Similar changes can be seen in the figures for
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 generated in Colombia, where there was no fluctuation from 2011 to 2012, but
then
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 it grew in the
last
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 year of the
period
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.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words coffee, period, thousand, units with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "figures" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "figures" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 2 times.
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