The bar chart below shows data on top four coffee producing countries in the world from 2011 to 2013. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparison where relevant.

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The bar chart provides information about how many details on four

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inducers worldwide, namely Brazil, Vietnam, Indonesia, and Colombia between 2011 and 2013.

Overall

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, there was an increase in the volume produced from the top four

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-producing nations; meanwhile, a rise moderately being seen in Indonesia and Colombia.

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, Brazil generally had the highest figures throughout the

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. At the beginning of the

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, the number of

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generated in Brazil started at over 40000

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units

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, after which it saw a progressive growth to upward of 50000

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units

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in 2012,

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dropped to less than 50000 in 2013.

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, the figure for Vietnam decreased in 2012, followed by a significant increase to peak at shy of 30000

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units

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at the end

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of the

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. Nearly 10000

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units

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coffee

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were produced in Indonesia in 2011, before reaching a peak at just over 10000 in 2012. From there, there will be no fluctuation in the following years. Similar changes can be seen in the figures for

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generated in Colombia, where there was no fluctuation from 2011 to 2012, but

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it grew in the

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year of the

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Vocabulary: Replace the words coffee, period, thousand, units with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: The word "figures" was used 3 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "figures" was used 3 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 2 times.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

195 words

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