The bar chart below shows the number of boys and girls playing different types of sports in a city in England called Canterbury in 2012.

The bar chart below shows the number of boys and girls playing different types of sports in a city in England called Canterbury in 2012.
The bar chart indicates the gender distribution of playing across a range of sports in Canterbury in 2012. significant differences between males and females are evident. Men outnumbered women in four
sport
disciplines: Tennis, Cycling, Football and Hockey. The gender gap was particularly large in football, where there were three times as many male players as female players.
on the other hand
, in Hockey, the gap was smaller than other sports and it was the least common
sport
among both sexes. women made up a large proportion of players in two
sport
disciplines: Badminton and Swimming. in both of them, where the number of women was equally more than men.
to sum up
, the figure shows that gender is a significant factor in individuals
sport
activities.
In addition
, participation was higher among the boys than among the girls.
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