The graph below shows the proportion of four different materials that were recycled from 1982 to 2010 in a particular country. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below shows the proportion of four different materials that were recycled from 1982 to 2010 in a particular country.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The line graph illustrates the
percentage
of four
kind
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of materials that were
warned
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over the period of 28 years starting from 1982 in a particular country.
Overall
,
it is clear that
during most of the period, the
percentage
of paper&cardboard witnessed the highest
trend
,
while
the opposite was true for the proportion of recycling on plastics. In the comparison with the
percentage
of paper & cardboard and glass containers warned in 1982, as much as higher than 15% respectively. Between 1986 and 1990, the line graph slightly decreased from 70% to 65% for the
percentage
of recycling paper and cardboard, and from 45% to 40% for recycling of glass containers. In the following 4 years, there was an upward
trend
for both paper& cardboard and glass containers, significantly
rose
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by 80% and 50% respectively. From 1994 onwards, the line graph for both recycled materials witnessed a downward
trend
during that paper&cardboard still was the highest
percentage
. Meanwhile, during most of the period, both figures for materials recycled, which were
alumininium
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aluminium
cans and plastics witnessed an upward
trend
.
Additionally
, the recycling rate for plastics was the lowest figure on the chart.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 5 times.
Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 4 times.

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  • proportion
  • recycled
  • materials
  • increased
  • paper and cardboard
  • plastic
  • glass
  • metal
  • significant increase
  • relatively stable
  • fluctuating
  • period
  • starting
  • reaching
  • gradually increasing
  • remained low
  • experienced
  • showed
  • greatest
  • proportion
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