The chart shows the main methods of transportation for people travelling to a university for work or study in 2004 and 2009 in the UK. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons wherever relevant.

The chart shows the main methods of transportation for people travelling to a university for work or study in 2004 and 2009 in the UK. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons wherever relevant.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The chart shows the main methods of transportation for people travelling to a university for work or study in 2004 and 2009 in the UK. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons wherever relevant.
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The given pie charts provide information on various types of transportation that
people
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use to get to work or study in 2004 and 2009 in one country.
Overall
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, in 2004 the most preferable type of transportation was cars, followed by buses and the least was trains. In 2009 figures had changed and
people
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started to choose more buses rather than cars, and the percentage of using trains remained relatively the same.
According to
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the charts, in 2004 the percentage of
people
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who used cars accounted for 51%,
while
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in 2009 the figures for the same type of transportation reduced to 28%. On the second place of choice among
people
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in 2004 was buses with 33%,
whereas
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in 2009 there was an increase to 46% and the same type of transport became at the top of the list.
In contrast
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, there is the same position among
people
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who preferred
bicycle
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bicycles
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in 2004 and 2009 and accounted for 9% and 16%, respectively. The figures for trains did not change a lot, only by 1% in 2009.
However
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, there is a little growth
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the percentage of
people
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who chose walking by 2% from 2004 to 2009.

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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Vocabulary: Replace the words people with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "charts" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "figures" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "changed" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 3 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • Mode of transportation
  • Significant percentage
  • Noticeable decrease/increase
  • Environmentally friendly
  • Public transit systems
  • Commuting habits
  • Relatively stable
  • Sustainable
  • Collective modes of transportation
  • Environmental awareness
  • Economic factors
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