The line graph shows the percentages of Australian export with four countries. The graph below shows the percentage of Australian exports to 4 countries from 1990 to 2012
The graph and line illustrate the amount of Australian output from four different countries(Japan,the United States,China,and India) from 1990 to 2012.
Overall
, the highest output, in the beginning, was with Japan and India had the lowest,however
, in the end, the first place took China.
To begin
with, from 1990 to 1995 Japan had a dramatic decrease from 27 % to 20% and till the end fluctuating and had 17% in 2012. In terms of the United States, in the start had 12 % and was also
fluctuating,but in 2000 got the same percentages as the start,respectively. However
,from 2000 to 2008 dramatically decreased and reached the minimum in 2010 at 6 %,till the end fluctuating and increasing by one per cent. Regard China, had increased from 1990 to 2000(3% and 5%),and soared to 2012 with 30 % and could get the highest result on that graph. India had the most dramatic per cent from the start and was at the bottom of this
chart with 3 % approximately,however
,was fluctuating and could have the same percentages as the US in 2008 and in 2011 ( 8% and 7%)Submitted by batirka06 on
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