The diagram illustrates the process that is used to manufacture bricks for the building industry.

The diagram illustrates the process that is used to manufacture bricks for the building industry.
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The chart explains the way in which
bricks
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are made for the building industry.
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, the
process
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of producing the
bricks
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involves 5 main stages starting from
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the dugging
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dugging
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digging
up of the
clay
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and ending with
delivery
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the delivery
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of goods ready to use.
To begin
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, the
clay
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is
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used to make the
bricks
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is dug up from the ground by a large digger.
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clay
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is
then
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placed onto a metal grid, which is used to break up the
clay
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into small pieces. A roller assists in
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process
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as well.
Following
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this
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, sand and water are added to the
clay
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, and the mixture is turned into
the
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bricks
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by either placing it into a mould or using a wire cutter.
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after receiving the
bricks
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, they are placed in an oven to dry for 24-48 hours. In the subsequent stage, the
bricks
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go through a heating and cooling
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. They are
heatedd
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heated
in a kiln at a moderate and
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a
hign
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high
temperature (ranging from 200 C to 1300 C),
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followed
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by a cooling
process
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in a chamber for 2-3 days.
Finally
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, the
bricks
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are ready for package and delivery to their destinations.
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Basic structure: Change the second paragraph.
Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
Basic structure: Change the fifth paragraph.
Vocabulary: Replace the words bricks, process, clay with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: Only 3 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fifth paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • diagram
  • manufacture
  • bricks
  • building industry
  • process
  • dig
  • prepare
  • clay
  • mold
  • shape
  • dry
  • fire
  • kiln
  • cool
  • package
  • fired
  • overview
  • importance
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