The diagram illustrates the process that is used to manufacture bricks for the building industry. Summarise th information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagram illustrates the process that is used to manufacture bricks for the building industry. 

Summarise th information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The chart explains the way in which
bricks
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are made for the building industry.
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, the action of producing the
bricks
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involves 5 main stages starting from digging up of the
clay
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and ending with the delivery of goods ready to use.
To begin
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, the
clay
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used to make the
bricks
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is dug up from the ground by a large digger.
This
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clay
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is
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placed onto a metal grid, which is used to break up the
clay
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into small pieces. A roller assists in
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operation as well.
Following
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this
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, sand and water are added to the
clay
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, and the mixture is turned into
bricks
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by either placing it into a mould or using a wire cutter.
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after receiving the
bricks
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, they are placed in an oven to dry for 24-48 hours. In the subsequent stage, the
bricks
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go through a heating and cooling step. They are heated in a kiln at a moderate and
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a high temperature (ranging from 200 C to 1300 C), followed by a cooling procedure in a chamber for 2-3 days.
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, the
bricks
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are ready for package and delivery to their destinations.
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