The diagram illustrates the process that is used to manufacture bricks for the building industry. Summarise th information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagram illustrates the process that is used to manufacture bricks for the building industry. 

Summarise th information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The chart explains the way in which
bricks
are made for the building industry.
Overall
, the action of producing the
bricks
involves 5 main stages starting from digging up of the
clay
and ending with the delivery of goods ready to use.
To begin
, the
clay
used to make the
bricks
is dug up from the ground by a large digger.
This
clay
is
then
placed onto a metal grid, which is used to break up the
clay
into small pieces. A roller assists in
this
operation as well.
Following
this
, sand and water are added to the
clay
, and the mixture is turned into
bricks
by either placing it into a mould or using a wire cutter.
Next,
after receiving the
bricks
, they are placed in an oven to dry for 24-48 hours. In the subsequent stage, the
bricks
go through a heating and cooling step. They are heated in a kiln at a moderate and
then
a high temperature (ranging from 200 C to 1300 C), followed by a cooling procedure in a chamber for 2-3 days.
Finally
, the
bricks
are ready for package and delivery to their destinations.
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