The graph below shows the number of tourists visiting a particular Caribean island between 2010 and 2017. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features ,and make comparision where relevent.
The line chart depicts the information about the visitors who visited a specific Caribbean Island over the
period
from 2010 to 2017. Units are measured in millions
.
Overall
, as can be clearly seen from the graph, the total number of tourists
and
who preferred to stay on cruise ships increased throughout the Correct word choice
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period
. While
the number of visitors who chose to stay on the island did not witness any significant change over the given period
.
Regarding the
total number of Change preposition
The
tourists
have
seen a steady increase since 2010. At the start of the Correct subject-verb agreement
has
period
, it made up 1 millions
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million
of
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tourists
and finally
accounted for exactly 3.5 millions
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million
of
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tourists
in 2017. Additionally
, visitors who chose to stay on cruise ships were approximately 0.25 millions
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million
of
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tourists
in 2010, they then
witnessed a slight increase at
0.5 Change preposition
to
millions
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million
of
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tourists
in 2011,
and again experienced a gradual growth during a Remove the comma
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6-years
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6-year
period
which constituted precisely 2 millions
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million
of
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tourists
.
In contrast
, the figure for the tourists
who were staying on island
started at nearly 0.75 Add an article
the island
millions
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million
of
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tourists
in 2010 and remain
unchanged until 2011. Wrong verb form
remained
Moreover
, they climbed up gradually before levelling off at 1.5 millions
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million
of
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tourists
from 2013 onwards. Finally
, the figure finished at 1.5 millions
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million
of
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tourists
in 2017.Submitted by mohammad39 on
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Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
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