The table below shows percentage of students giving good ratings for different aspects of a university in China in 2000, 2005, 2010.
The table reveals the percentage of students who scored different aspects of a university in China in the years 2000, 2005, and 2010.
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quality just was rated from 65 to 69 Add an article
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that print resources have been up to 88 Linking Words
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