The diagram below shows the manufacturing process for making sugar from sugar cane
An illustration
under
depicts processing for converting to Change preposition
apply
sugar
from Use synonyms
sugar
cane .
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Overall
, it involves Linking Words
in
7 stages Change preposition
apply
begin
with harvesting and crushing them to Wrong verb form
beginning
juice
and Use synonyms
then
making Linking Words
juice
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to
syrup by heating up and Change preposition
into
final
end into Correct article usage
the final
sugar
.
It takes between (12 -18 ) months period for Use synonyms
growing
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grow
sugar
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canes
Fix the agreement mistake
cane
.after
that it Correct your spelling
After
started
harvesting to put them Wrong verb form
starts
for
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in
crushing
machine to get Correct article usage
the crushing
juice
from it , to purify the Use synonyms
juice
Use synonyms
lime stone
is added to filter it .
At stage 5 , it Correct your spelling
limestone
heated
in high flame Add a missing verb
is heated
juice
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turn
into syrup through evaporation and Correct subject-verb agreement
turns
next
stage centrifuge divides Correct article usage
the next
Use synonyms
sugar
crystals from Correct article usage
the sugar
syrup
and Correct article usage
the syrup
at
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in
final
stage Correct article usage
the final
sugar
crystals Use synonyms
send
for drying and cooling and Wrong verb form
are sent
then
it ready for consumption.Linking Words
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