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The pie chart charts below shows the online shopping sales for retail sectors in New Zealand in 2003 and 2013

The pie chart charts below shows the online shopping sales for retail sectors in New Zealand in 2003 and 2013
#sales #sectors #zealand
The two pie charts below
depicts
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 the
sales
 for online shopping in different categories in New Zealand between 2003 and 2013.
Overall
, the sector with the highest number of
sales
 was
for
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travel in the year 2003,
atlhough
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 numbers did not stay as the most spent on category as the numbers dwindled after 10 years by 7%.
In contrast
, people showed an interest
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 film and music since the
sales
 for
this
 category rose up to 12% in the year 2013.
By contrast
, there was not much change
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 the percentage of
sales
 for both the book and clothing sector in New Zealand. Both sectors remained the lowest category on which people were spending
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with only a 3% rise
on
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 books
while
 the
sales
for
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 clothes decreased by 8%. To sum it up, the residents of New Zealand are more keen on investing
on
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 film and music after a decade.
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