The pie chart charts below shows the online shopping sales for retail sectors in New Zealand in 2003 and 2013
The two pie charts below
depicts
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depict
sales
for online shopping in different categories in New Zealand between 2003 and 2013.
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Overall
, the sector with the highest number of Linking Words
sales
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for
travel in the year 2003, Change preposition
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atlhough
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although
theses
numbers did not stay as the most spent on category as the numbers dwindled after 10 years by 7%. Correct your spelling
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In contrast
, people showed an interest Linking Words
on
film and music since the Change preposition
in
sales
for Use synonyms
this
category rose up to 12% in the year 2013.
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By contrast
, there was not much change Linking Words
on
the percentage of Change preposition
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sales
for both the book and clothing sector in New Zealand. Both sectors remained the lowest category on which people were spending Use synonyms
on
with only a 3% rise Change preposition
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on
books Change preposition
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while
the Linking Words
sales
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for
clothes decreased by 8%.
To sum it up, the residents of New Zealand are more keen on investing Change preposition
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on
film and music after a decade.Change preposition
in
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